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Darkness #1:

I can't see you.
Can you see me?
It's all dark here
with just you and me.
There is blood on the walls
and in my hair.
I cannot find you anywhere.
This place it's all dark and cold,
but my love is strong and bold.
Will this be our final hour,
just laying here?
I see the faint trace of hope
then it fades.
I thought I was seeing things.
"I love you my dear" you say faintly to me.
All I can see is darkness and red all to my side...
But as quickly as I was there
I soon was gone.
Now on my right,
is red roses glore.
I look at my sleves,
all covered in white and blood.
I see the man,
the man in black.
But soon as I see him,
I quickly turn my back.
I feel some pain,
right in my chest.
I am dead to the world,
and to him, the man in black.
I just wish I could say bye,
to my lover in green.
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Darkness #1: I can't see you.by GlaceonLeafeon15

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Concrete Poetry©2012-2014 GlaceonLeafeon15
Hi Hi!
WOW It's been a bit since I posted something last.
Uh.. ya... If you want to hear the story of why I wrote this was:
It was about 11:30 P.M. and I was playing Slender :'(
And suddenly the lights turn off. I almost screamed thinking that he was coming for me.
But I was using my laptop so It didn't turn off (THANK GAWD!)
So I was listening to my music trying to calm my nerves.
AND SUDDENLY! I started writing this on Mircrosoft Word. (I usaully use Google Drive but there was no Internet...)
I thought it was OK. So I decided to post this on dA.

HEY if you think this is dark (I dunno why though)
I'll put this on mature content but not like where you have to be 18+ though.
ALSO: I HATE THIS NEW SUBMIT DA THING!!!! >:(

~EDIT:
OMG!!! Thank you guys so much for all the faves!!!! :D
I didn't think it would be this famous! I saw 311 faves after it being here for 5 days!
Oh yes! DONT COME FOR ART! I hate my artwork, so I use some from the interweb! Don't call me a stealer ;~;

ALSO:
I'm gonna make a 2nd now! ^^
So here are your choices for the next one to be based of! :P
Ib, another Zelda, or other! Leave it in the comments please!

THANK YOU FOR FAVING AND COMMENTING!
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PACHARCHAR Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The girl in the picture looks like Zelda.

Actually, she probably IS Zelda.
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GlaceonLeafeon15 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
I know it's not my art. I suck at art I don't claim it to be mine either.
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katriel12 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is pritty
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Faguya Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
hearts are red
bombs are blue
give him a pink fairy
and he`ll live with you
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CrashKirby64 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's amazing. But....why did you use Zelda? Just wondering. It's sounds and looks wonderful :D
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GlaceonLeafeon15 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
I'm a big LoZ fan :D
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CrashKirby64 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey, so am I!
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GlaceonLeafeon15 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
That's awesome! :D
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